tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6146913716621794931.post4336638691741809462..comments2014-06-23T18:29:10.187-07:00Comments on Jessica's writing journey: Graf # 1 Hands Jessica Riley's writing journeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13226828829447266308noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6146913716621794931.post-65943437237155999352012-08-26T11:57:17.907-07:002012-08-26T11:57:17.907-07:00Thank you. I do tend to ramble on and on so it wou...Thank you. I do tend to ramble on and on so it wouldn't surprise me one bit if you end up telling me that I confuse you.Jessica Riley's writing journeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13226828829447266308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6146913716621794931.post-62411631948890084142012-08-26T06:48:01.870-07:002012-08-26T06:48:01.870-07:00I like the smooth way this follows your thought pa...I like the smooth way this follows your thought patterns and segues from the general and depressed to the description to the Birkenstock humor to the manicurist to the paper cut metaphor to the school kids teasing.<br /><br />Put like that it sounds like there might be something wrong with so much squeezed into a graf, but it's all held nicely in your head and then the reader's head, and we don't get the least bit lost or confused.johngoldfinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09322562737172405323noreply@blogger.com